Hi its hmsjenny here, today I’m going to talk about my best work in language arts. My best work in language arts would be the “escape from Alcatraz” We had to write an essay about Alcatraz and Morris and the Anglin brothers. It was a competition.

Alcatraz Island Report

 

There is a place called Alcatraz in the San Francisco bay. There were 3 prisoners named Morris, and the Anglin brothers who tried to escape. They built their own raft to sail across the ocean. They had to go through security as well. Some people think they made it with evidence from the article, but some people like me don’t think they made it. If they were to make it, they probably would’ve still been alive today. The stolen things that the article said could’ve been someone else.

 

The island Alcatraz is one of the world’s most toughest prison, the island has the world’s most toughest criminals. It use to be a prison, but now you can visit the island. You will have to ride a boat or a raft to get to the island because it is surrounded by water. The water is quite dangerous because of the rough currents.

 

Why I think they didn’t make it, was because the currents in the water was pretty strong, so the raft would have sank, or could’ve broke. It also could’ve been really stormy the night they escaped, and maybe they couldn’t have found shelter. They also could’ve not have any money to buy food. Since they are criminals, they might have stolen the food, which would have gotten themselves sent back to Alcatraz.

I think the raft that Morris and the Anglin brothers made might have not worked. The raft could have drowned because it might have not been strong enough to hold the three of them. They also might have not have building experience, so the raft could have failed. It also would have taken them days to build. The raft also could have broken because it might not have been made properly.

 

I don’t think that they made it even with the evidence they had in the article. If they made it, then they might have stolen more things, and gotten all of them sent back to Alcatraz. I think that they are one of the most dangerous and toughest criminals ever. If the article were to say that they didn’t make it, then I would more believe that they didn’t

That’s it for today, bye

hmsjenny